Restaurant Review

While reading over the restaurant review, i found many interesting things. First off, he started off the article with a very vivd image, somehwat seeting the image in your head of what he was talking about. The next interesting thing was he asked a question about how good Argentenian food was, which i found peculiar in itself. Then he goes into telling how the beef is made and the proper titles for that dish. Throughout this whole article, he puts in sentences of history and his own experiences. I also found this article to be very informal yet at the same time it was proper. His descriptive detail of every dish helped you visualiaze what was offered at the restaurant, with his occasional insight every now and then. I alss thought that the first weeks reviews was very original to the article. Overall, the article was very easy and interesting to read due to its informal yet attractive style.

Paper Agenda

I have a huge problem writing papers. My ideas are very choppy and do not flow well together. So for this paper, i will be working on m action verbs and getting my ideas to flow. also i will be trying to get very strong transition sentences and i have to strengthen my thesis statement. Also with papers, i have a problem writing a thesis so i will be working hard on that to try and get a very well put together thesis.